Good:
- Compiled an understandable linear narrative through mostly close ups (a lack of medium and long shots increases audience anticipation and reinforces the thriller genre)
- Managed to add more than one clip from aerial shot
- Clear transition from 'primary' location of the beach to 'secondary' location of the shed (ending puddle shot, blackout, Sam unlocking shed door)
- Soundtrack needs to be added and diegetic noise needs to be edited (at the moment it is jarring)
- Titles and credits need to be added
- Some shots require shortening e.g. 0:05 wobbles at the end and 0:50 lasts too long. Also the shed sequence requires faster paced editing, perhaps with the shot of Ian entering the shed being split up using the razor tool and inserted in quick 'flashes' so as to heighten tension
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